深夜摇摆 单压也能玩的很高端,结合双压更牛逼!

从零开始写Rap2019-01-10 14:06:28
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由于白天上班的原因,一般小二晚上12点后到第二天晚上8点多很有可能回复不了后台,所以请留言、投稿的小伙伴多点耐心,谢谢大家一直的支持!


通过之前的几十篇词,相信大家也对尾部的双压有一定感觉了,今天给大家分享一点单压技巧。


谢谢你 By 光光


也难 就是要

骂来骂去炒着冷

比完套路 玩不过你们

我又能够怎么

冰冷的刀子捅的多

下一秒立刻换偶像打

没关系把你伪装做好

你知道我一直悠着寡


其实真情实感的feedback,配上单压,也能效果超群!


下面再给大家推荐一首单双压结合的歌,House of Games II By LocksmithVerse 1 完美演绎押韵艺术和歌词内容的结合,歌词将单压、双压、回韵、中间韵各种结合,至今小二还没数清楚里面有多少个韵脚...


Stick a fork in his corpse,

cordially courting

Sourcing his portion for organs,

give metaphors an abortion


A portrait of poor sportsmen

endorse and remorse towards him

I torch his vocal cords

til his course is the four horsemen


Your core's forcing,

they roar but I’m board snoring

A smorgasbord of endorphins,

I’m dwarfing your dwarf swordsmen


I retort but of course

no recourse for it

I’m more of a moor,

that's why my rapport discourse for it


I’m forming a fort,

forcing proportions that pour forward

Sort of a four-fifth

to your orifice you poor bitch


Forfeit, tryna spit with this nigga,

I forewarned him

Waging a war,

décor of Muhammed

or George Foreman


Performing vocal expressions

that questions the status quo

Inhabit no sense of worth

when you barely can pack a show


Distracted by the fact

I was too rabid impacted by

The shit that people said,

but instead let amplified


And niggas want a response,

my response; "Keep waiting"

Fools rush in,

smart niggas keep patient


Chasing the next man,

the best plan developed wrong

Fuck rushing a freestyle my nigga,

make a better song



看完是不是觉得单压结合双压也很厉害呢?其实在艺术形式上,在每句话结尾双压的表现比较单调,如果能把单双压两者结合起来,相信你的文字会更加多变精彩,之后几天会介绍各种押韵的技巧,主要以单压为主。


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